Oh, babe, I know how much you loved to play hide and seek where you stole my heart and everything I could call mine.
And you always made me the seeker, dooming me to find myself in your vague reflection and you, the hider – never revealing your true self beneath those pearl eyes and teal stockings.
But the games were fun until that day when you took me to the lakes for one final round of hide and seek and stole my breath and strangled me in your ocean and left me to drown.
I never got to seek you again.
Originally published in A Cornered Gurl on Medium
Thank you so much for reading! Feel free to share your thoughts or drop in any suggestions ❤
Until your next notification,
Nihu
Oh damn…
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I hope that it’s oh damn in a good way, haha😂
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Yesss haha😁 Oh damn in awe because it was so good & unexpected
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Haha, yayy! Thank you so much for reading and commenting, it means a lot Sumeet❣🤗
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It’s my pleasure reading you🥺
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🥺🥺
I’m melting like seriously help🤧♥️
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No no, don’t melt!!! You’ve to write much more 😉
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Ohh yess! That is true. I’ll try not melting then😂🤭
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Goooood then😎😎😎
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😂😂🙌🙌
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Very nicely written my friend. Surprisingly sad ending. Lovely work. Hugs 🤗 Joni
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Thank you so much for reading and commenting, it truly means a lot!
Hugs back🤗 Niharika
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You made cry 😢 love it though
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I’m glad you love it but not glad that I made you cry🥺
Thank you so much for reading! How’re you doing today? 😊
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🌟🌟🌟
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the twist at the end though
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🤭🤭🤭🤭
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Okay wow
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That took a hard left turn quite fast, wasn’t expecting that.
But this was quite a lovely read! Btw, how are you doing? Long time no see
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Thank you so much sir, it truly means a lot.
Yess! It certainly has been a long time.
I’m doing great sir, how about you? 😊
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You’re most welcome!
Well, I’m doing great (even though exams are right around the corner 😅)
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Oh no! Same here tho😭
Good luck for your exams! They’ll go amazing, I’m sure🥳
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Oho, good luck to both of us then! 😂
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Yes thank you!😂It’s much needed for me🤧
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It’s a pity what happened at the end… but that’s life I guess
Lovely piece
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It certainly is a pity.
Thank you so much Kim🤗💖
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